[AZW] ↠ Free Download ¾ Change of Focus : by Lucy Whedon ✓ #2019


  • Title: Change of Focus
  • Author: Lucy Whedon
  • ISBN: -
  • Page: 284
  • Format: ebook

  • Change of Focus By Lucy Whedon Dear Author,This was supposed to have been my honeymoon How ironic, we ve been engaged for 2 years but as soon as Maryland Equality in Marriage passed, he started to get cold feet and then he breaks up with me We always said we would go to Japan together but only one of us made it So here I am taking pictures and feeling a little sorry for myself, when I hear the soundDear Author,This was supposed to have been my honeymoon How ironic, we ve been engaged for 2 years but as soon as Maryland Equality in Marriage passed, he started to get cold feet and then he breaks up with me We always said we would go to Japan together but only one of us made it So here I am taking pictures and feeling a little sorry for myself, when I hear the sound of someone taking pictures to the side of me I turn and there he is, smiling, camera pointed directly at me, laughing even, and daring me to be in on the joke.Maybe this trip is just the thing I needed, who knew a honeymoon for one could end up for two Photo Description A Japanese man with a black, wispy hair holds a camera He is wearing a leather jacket and looking intently at the subject he is shooting.This story was written as a part of the M M Romance Group s Love Has No Boundaries event Group members were asked to write a story prompt inspired by a photo of their choice Authors of the group selected a photo and prompt that spoke to them and wrote a short story.
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    Commentaires:

    Richard Derus
    Rating 3.5 of fiveThe Publisher Says Dear Author,This was supposed to have been my honeymoon How ironic, we ve been engaged for 2 years but as soon as Maryland Equality in Marriage passed, he started to get cold feet and then he breaks up with me We always said we would go to Japan together but only one of us made it So here I am taking pictures and feeling a little sorry for myself, when I hear the sound of someone taking pictures to the side of me I turn and there he is, smiling, camera pointe [...]

    Mandy*reads obsessively*
    I feel really spoiled by all the wonderful authors contributing their stories to all the great picture prompts in this event Just had to throw that out there 3.75 Nik is in Japan at a fantasy convention I think after just having called it quits with the man he thought he was going to marry.He soon finds himself with a stalkerbut Ren is not a bad kind of stalker I got the feeling Ren is smitten with Nik, and despite all the baggage Nik is carrying around at the moment he also finds Ren very attra [...]

    Pjm12
    The author does a really good job of capturing Nik s despair with Evan s rejection His irritability, his drunken recklessness, his ridiculous judgements about Daniel Ren He s not very nice here, but underneath, we can see he s trying to hang on and move on.I loved the use of the brackets I tend to over use them at will , as well as the use of the fantasy convention as a backdrop to this somewhat fumbling romance Cara s role as sounding board, as life coach, as cupid is integral to the story She [...]

    Meep
    A simple short story but I couldn t connect to the characters Ren s behaviour was creepy stalkerish and for all they laughed about it, to me it was impending court case than romance Nik s behaviour towards him was explained but objectively it was reason to walk way, not hop on a plane and follow view spoiler he even thought of his recent ex when they had sex that s rebound not HEA hide spoiler The story felt rebound than future relationship, and the texts from his ex Evan didn t help cancel th [...]

    Julesmarie
    This had several elements that I don t generally enjoy so much in stories Ren was rather creepy and stalkerish, Nik was totally an asshole to him, and Ren continued to pursue Nik in spite of that But for some reason, the story actually worked for me.Perhaps because I understood Nik s motivations and knew that he wasn t INTENDING to be an asshole, that s just how things ended up happening And I even understood why Ren wasn t willing to give up and it actually came across as sweet rather than cree [...]

    Maiko-chan
    Couldn t connect to the characters, somehow Ren s actions just came across as creepy, but a glaring typo really pulled me out of the story Nick could be a perfectly acceptable nickname for Nikolas, but not when it suddenly switches from Nik This is the main character and his name gets spelt wrong, and it isn t even from another character saying his name, and presumably imagining a different spelling.

    Janeylou
    2.5 stars

    Annika
    3,5 I think this story was rather good in the department how someone emotionally deals with a rejection by the person he thought loved him Nik s struggles, anger, depression, rebellion felt very real The romance part on the other hand did indeed feel like a one time only thing only which helped Nik to gain again confidence and move on I m not sure if Nik and Ren will make it in the end even so I m happy the author didn t rush things but gave them a time out after their Japanese encouter.

    Anna Kļaviņa
    Sweet short story A bit unusual a main character broke with his partner, a good type of stalking, mixed race character that mentions issues of being interracial These 3 makes the story stand out

    Victoria
    Sweet and stalkerish Nice interpretation of the photo and the story letter Thank you Lucy Whedon for donating your story, your time and your talent.

    Donna
    I found this short story to have an unusual writing style that really drew me in Yeah, there were a few issues that needed to be addressed namely the whole Nik Nick issue but overall this was a free read that kept my attention and read quickly NO downside to that D

    K
    LHNB Story released 4.7.13This is the story of the newly single Nik and the photographer, Ren, who is following him around a convention in Japan This one didn t work for me as I couldn t find any chemistry between Nik, whose thoughts and actions yelled rebound to me and Ren, whose actions could only really be described as creepily stalkerish.

    Melanie~~
    I didn t especially connect with these main characters, so I wasn t very interested in them coming together in the end I also found the way Ren tracked Nik down to be a bit of a plot hole NOTE I rate most writing event stories free reads 4 or 5 stars because of my appreciation of the author s participation.

    Sandra
    Offered for FREE from the M M Romance Group s Love Has No Boundaries event Thank you too all the amazing authors who participated

    blub
    A sweet short read It was nice reading about Nik trying to move on from a relationship he invested three years of his life when he found out it was going nowhere Yeah, Nik was a bit wishy washy on whether or not he was still with Evan, but it was fun watching Ren impose himself and try to incorporate himself into Nik s life.

    Rachel Emily
    Congrats on writing such a great first story I really loved itloved the pace of it and your characters I thought you did a great job answering the prompt and photo, I really enjoyed this one Thank you for the story and I look forward to what you write next 3.5 stars rounded up to 4.

    Syfy
    Easy going, insightful, pleasant and thoroughly enjoyable

    Meggie
    Overall, a nice, easy shorty, but for my taste to plain Maybe I m to tired, because I couldn t connect with Nick s troubled life, but I m glad he found Ren They seemed to be good together.

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